Reviews for Time is Running Out
Bethesda551 chapter 5 . 7/16
more?
malinchen chapter 5 . 3/9/2016
Hey :)
This story is soooo good, why did you stop?
Steve and Danno are so cute together, and Danny being framed for murder is a really great idea!
I really hope you continue this, because I totally love the story ;)
ANIMEHOLIC52891 chapter 5 . 3/25/2015
This is a great story. I hope that they solve the crime soon and bring their Danno home.
PCJanto chapter 4 . 12/7/2014
Awesome story,
Gyugeegee chapter 5 . 9/5/2014
I like it !
How Danny is beeing frame .
But what'll happen ? Can they prove his innocence before going to prison ?
Or our Danno'll suffer a little in prison before being clear ?
Update soon
I want to know what'll happen next )
storyfan101 chapter 5 . 8/8/2014
It's all just sunshine and roses, isn't it? I hope something turns up soon in Danny's favour. The thought of Danny in prison makes me shiver, and not in the good, enjoyable way.
TMVH50 chapter 5 . 8/8/2014
It looks like things are getting worse for our Danno before they get better, eh? Because they will get better, right? Looking forward to more.
jerseysgirl50 chapter 4 . 7/15/2014
i had a random thought reading this with Grover kinda just popping up, could he have anything to do with it? Maybe get Danny out the way type thing?

or just cause hes part of the team now... could go either way... lol
Rainey chapter 4 . 7/15/2014
It's great to see an update to this story. This chapter was so exciting. I was hoping Danny and Steve would be able to get the evidence and find a place for Danny to lay low, but things didn't work out that way. What's going to happen to him in Halawa? Can't wait for the next update.
sue2556 chapter 4 . 7/15/2014
Great story, Please continue with the updates, can't wait for the next one.

Sue
my-place12 chapter 4 . 7/15/2014
Loved it! Post more soon! Interested in how this plays out! :)
starli84 chapter 4 . 7/15/2014
Oh my god, this chapter was kickass, amazing and downright wow! So good to see you've updated babykins, I wouldn't like to be in the murderers shoes when the ohana find him/her. So excited to have you updating again :) xxx
Rainey chapter 3 . 5/25/2014
Great chapter. Now that they have some clues, Steve and Danny have to find that evidence before HPD does, or things won't be looking too good for Danny.
starli84 chapter 3 . 5/25/2014
Doing a happy dance here to see an update, its cheered me up so I'm gonna do a review now. I love Steve and Danno and again I say I hate that Danno has been framed but Steve, Kono and Danno will save him. I love how Steve goes a hunting for Danny and they have a "moment" and hopefully there will be more moments as well. Looking forward to reading more and seeing where this story goes. And by the way. You are freaking awesome and an amazing writer xx
Shelley67 chapter 3 . 5/25/2014
First my review: This is great - someone is going to a lot of trouble to frame Danny and I am patiently waiting to find out who that is. I can't believe HPD would just hunt Danny now like an animal - what happened to innocent until proven guilty by a court of law - well aren't they going to look foolish when Danny is found innocent.

Second this is for guest: Get a life and I also suggest quit reading Hawaii Five O Fan fiction - you are gutless when you can't even post your own name. Don't like don't read. There are fabulous writers out here and then they are people like you who like to trash others and then go slide off and hide. I see you can dish it out but only when you hide behind guest - can't dish it out with your real name can you.
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