That was so beautiful. You did an amazing job!

Beautiful

Great work! I love it all! You should do this scene from charmings POV! I think it would be interesting. Either way keep up the good work! I hate reading but I can't stop reading your writing. It's truly impeccable

I'm seriously crying right now. This short story is filled with so much emotion, it's perfect.

It's so beautiful and sad. I cried during this scene so much.
This is the scene Snowing saddest thing I've seen, even more than the episode where Snow no longer remembered Charming.

So so beautiful. So so powerful. Yet so so tragic. You're writing is simply stunning!

This was really good! Your writing is always great:)

So sad, you did great with Snow's POV during this! Those flashbacks were definitely one of the saddest the show has had, and even though you knew it was probably going to turn out okay, it was still heartbreaking to think of Snowing being separated forever!

Just wow. That is beautiful.