such a grief is more than I was thinking

beautiful story you write here. very nice to read and sad so i cry

sorry no habla english

Es muy bien!

Wow I don't know what to say.

This was simply amazing. The characterization, descriptions, everything...I love how you portrayed Tobirama's inner struggle.

While I never cared much for him, this fic made me see a whole other side to his character and I feel like I can sympathize. His feelings for Hashi on top of the jealousy with Madara add a whole other element to your writing.

The ending is simply poignant.

Thank you for such a beautiful fic.

i admit i went into this very skeptical. after a few paragraphs i couldn't stop reading. you are an excellent writer.

I cried at the end. This was so sad T.T Tobirama huhuhu. Thank you for writing this!

This was so tragic and beautiful. Everything was just so perfect! I love your stories so much, this one I loved the most!

wow, thanks! Tangible drama makes real life seem simple.

This was beautiful, I loved it. Well done. :)

Wow. No words for the pain of the unrequited words. And Hashirama choosing Madara over Tobirama...it's just so real. Thank you for contributing this.

I am literally crying right now. You wrote this all out so perfectly it just falls into place like the words of emotional doom. And the younger sibling wanting the elder's attention, I can connect to that so well (not the incest part, but just approval).

I don't know what to say after this... I mean, i always have see people on tumblr talking about this fic, but i am not too much on the predecessors like Hashirama, Madara and Tobirama to realluy found a fic and read, even if i love them, but... Like i said, everybody talk about this fic and i am speachless with it.
It's so sad, but accurate and i can almost think this as cannon and for the first time i hate hashimada by the wound Tobirama felt all this years.
Seriously girl this fic is really amazing and yeah you're right its horrible on the same time.

OMG this is the darkest love story ever! I can't put everything into words after i've read this! How Tobirama wanted Hashirama to love him was just too good to be true! The story has it's own unique,perfect balance and plot which could rival any other fanfiction! And in the ending,how it fit Tobirama to be the second in all things,since all the events added up in the story to make the conclusion just perfect! And Tobirama's personality is even cooler and better than in the manga itself! It's a great story!

This is my 2nd time reading and I am more amazed. I think this captured the nuances of emotion so well, and the development of their relationship from the time they were children until Hashirama's death was believable. It is the first fic I read of this pairing, at first I thought it was odd but then after reading, it felt like it could happen in the manga. My fave scene was the second kiss and Tobirama showing his real emotions... it was a twisted kind of confession. I also like the scene when Hashirama went back from killing Madara, even if it was sad to read.

Anyway good job and at the moment this is my favorite Naruto fic.

BEAUTIFUL! T-T I just love Hahsirama's and Tobirama's relationship with each other!

This hurt to read (in the best way). Just...poor Tobirama. There isn't enough exploring this relationship, not even necessarily as a sexual one, but here he seems just so...taken for granted. I'd have thought someone who had lost two brothers already wouldn't be so careless of his last. It seems Tobirama was just too good at being a constant...and now I really wonder if Hashirama really would have coped any better than Madara without him. Izuna kills Tobirama AU? Or maybe when Madara doesn't give Hashirama the choice between him and his brother.

It seems to me that Hashirama wasn't a very good brother. Exactly what Madara would have thought of that if he ever realised it, because I think part of their connection was on the premise of the desire to protect their younger siblings. (I suddenly find myself not liking Hashirama very much. Maybe not a good things...)