I'm not crying you're crying

Got here from chapter six of "Devils, Angels, Dragons, and Naruto?"
Normally I stay away from one-shots but I kinda liked this one.

Great story.

heh i bet you were quite surprised when your prediction about Asura being Naruto and Indra being Sasuke came true in canon

That was so sad i cried, you really are talented to bring out emotions of other people through words

I've read a lot of " sad story's " that Naruto dies in and all but this story achaly made me cry this is now my favorite story :)

That was amazing, I almost cried which I only did twice reading a fanfic. Perhaps you can write more one shots.

I was moved by your story. Normaly a one shot naruto death fic is pretty predictable. This one was no different, it had just enough angst and sadness to get to you yet stopped just before becoming emo territory. The story was quick enough to not drag on and long enough to get the emotions across. Nothing was really original about this story but it was, in my opinion, wich is the only one that matters in this review extremely well executed. I feel like I just gave you a back handed compliment but it's not like you took and almost over used concept riddled with clichés and made the right blend to make it enjoyable. I've read 22 stories like this and when you get that far into a type of story it's all pretty familiar territory. at one point you only read them because it blends or reminds you of your first 8 but honestly, this may have renewed it for me. Thanks

this is one of the best short fanfics that i ever read it litterly made me cry a little

That was a very, very good one-shot.

I cried A little bit thier

BEST FANFICTION EVER!

Fuck you sad endings... *sob* *sob* why?! so sad!? *sob*

This got me so emotional I cried a few tears.

Even in his mindscape he can impregnate Kyuubi(with some help). What next, he will reincarnated himself so he can greet his wife and child. Nice