My fucking God, I hope he gets knock off a peg to realize what he's doing is nothing but antagonizing other pips. Too cocky, too arrogant, and high on his power(I would too).

I am gonna say this, he's fucking stupid. I always read my contracts or any shits that need my signature or agreement over I've got that beaten to my head by my family, also he could've joined the Alliance and since he's a natural biotic he could breeze through things and could take the Infiltrator route if he's patient and could probably get to N program. Then again it's overrated and I love this kind of setting.

feels quite messy with the other fanfics ocs

mc feels too cocky

not really a fan off adding the other oc characters from other fanfics

and mc shouting Justice really. just no, just no

mc is starting to feel like a show off and an andrealine junkie

hope Aila wont die

only thing i dont like about this fic is his subconcious mind shit. otherwise its good

not really a fan of mc crazy double personality disorder

Shame it had to end this way

You forgot the 'now'
He really needs to be killed now
Otherwise they will torture him first

Thank you for sharing.

Please finish. This is fucking awesome lmao

This fic is awesome! PLZ update!

Seeing as this was the last chapter, I'm guessing she took the order to kill him seriously.