Are you like dead or something?

My new favorite part: when Soren is bragging about how he killed Metal Beak. I always imagine Soren as a sweet and humble owl, so seeing him do that just cracked me up!

Also, I would suggest trying shorter sentences. Sometimes something short and sweet really gets the point across in a nice way, and it balances out all the longer sentences in the paragraph. Other than that, I am loving this story! Personally I'm on Boron's side of the argument, even though I've grown attached to the antagonist Alexander. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Man I have been falling behind on this story. I got go get back into guardians but I've dwelled into the rio jniverse.

This story is turning out really good so far! My favorite scene is when Nyra drags Kludd out the doors.