God, trying to get through this is terribly hard. Please get a beta to go through your grammatical issues. namely a big one being the fact that you're using "your" instead of "you're" for a lot of your sentences.

Back nooo cliffhanger..Will there be a part two to this? . And just awesome job on this story my friend the way you did the characters...just birelent..can't wait to see more from ya

First off wow, great detail and you captured Bloody Mary 'a personally spot on! Ohhhh the last ending... Holy crap, plot twist yo !

Glad to see a complex fic about crack queer couples that aren 'to just sex,sex, sex (although no doubt the body shot part was hot ;) )

Glad to know there's a fic like that that exists. It's beautifully written and it's a bold twist from most of the fics here.

I love that you are doing lesbian pairing stories... I'm writing my own right now, I thought I'd be the only one haha! I'm writing a Snow/Holly one. I love this fanfic by the way, its beautifully written and amazing. Thanks for writing it.

Emma

Nice! Try to do...maybe...a SnowxBeauty pairing? It's kind if a challenge to do if you ask me.

I loved the ending and can't wait for the other endings! Update soon please, and hood job! :)
By the way, would you consider writing more of Bloody Mary?

I really love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

This is so cool! Keep it goin

Coming to an end so soon? Can't wait to read more for
from you

I love your story and how you describe and write about Bloody Mary! The multi endings idea is also really cool! I can't wait to read the next chapters, so please, update soon.
I would totally read the stories if you decided to write more about Bloody Mary, I kind of love her character! Keep up the good work! :)

I imagine Mary would offer to reduce the debt in exchange for Beauty's "company". *shudder*

Bloody Mary/Snow would be good but if want a real challenge try Bloody/Bigby.

Yes pleas write stories of bloody Mary snow white au sounds awesome or ooc whichever you prefer .ah this tale just gets better and better I can't wait to see what you write next. And I am looking foreword to when you do write a snow and bloody Mary tale it will be and thank for writing fan fiction about mary .

Interesting story hope it gets even better

Wow, the body shot part was pretty hot. Looks like hell is about to break loose. Hope to see more I'm really loving this!