Fantastic

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I got mixed feeling about this story I love yahiko and not liking the direction your going with yahiko. Though I'm a curious person I want to see how this story turns out! I was actually hoping the one to go mad would be nagato... Lol YOUR YAHIKO SUCKSSS! Please update soon can't wait! :D

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That was a really awesome first chapter! All of the characters were represented well and they were very distinct. Your writing style is refreshing to see, I'll definitely be reading more. c:

i like this story

nice idea..I always thought of the reason that they were no brought along

marvelous

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I just finished reading all the chapters so far and I really love the story, can't wait for the next chapter.:)

just finished it, it's quite good and I enjoyed it worth keeping on going but just a few things I'd like to say;

1. Nagato or Kushina with a sword would have been better because of the Uzumakians natural proficiency in kenjustu.

2. I'd like to see some sealing techniques from kushina Nagato and minato

3. a must is nagato's rinnegan, I don't know if your changing when he got it or something but in cannon we know he already had it now and knew about it because of Jirarya ( not sure how to spell it) and it's instinctual for him to learn new techniques, maybe do that when his desperate or something though.

3. Please don't give anyone a weird weapon, it's probably just me but when people give their characters a weapon it like some stupid stick thing that fires frogs or some shit.

4. I'd probably prefer to see a Nagato centric but that's just me.

5. I'd love to see some darkness or a bit of a vengeful Nagato

Good story I think you should keep going, sorry about my grammar I honestly couldn't be bothered re reading it haha

I wonder how it would have ended if Nagato would have just given up.

I love Nagato so much!

Awwwwwwwww that was so sweet

Can't wait to see how Tsunade's gonna handle her team.

But the moment when Nagato got his first kiss was so adorable.