This is an awesome story...please don't leave them standing in the hall though. lol

I'd love to read the rest of it if you find the muse. xx

Liked this a whole lot...it's been a while, but I hope you continue on one day.

Please tell me this is going to be continued. This is amazing. :)

Holy buckets. Left me wanting more. It's just like me to get hooked on a story like this. I hope you are updating soon! Thanks!

Kind of a bittersweet little story you have going, but your writing's good and I'd like to read more, if you're going to continue. Very evocative writing!

great writing!

This first chapter was great :)

This was really great! You should definitely add more chapters! I love the whole idea of neighbor stories

Love this, hope you write more soon.

I just read through these two chapters, and my mind is blown. Your attention to detail is crazy good! I feel like your a drawing picture with your words.

There are so many things that I love about this story. One of the things that I love, is that the chapters are actually long! Haha! :) And I love your characterization of these beloved characters. I love your Daryl. I like that he is there for his brother, yet he's not following Merle around like a lost puppy. He's grounded. He has his own place & a dog. He is his own man. And that end scene was oh so Daryl of him, I can just see the expression on Beth's face. Speaking of her, your Beth is my favorite. She is everything she should be. Simple as that. You write them perfectly. This story is perfect. I can't wait to read more, & I'm looking forward to the next update.

Wow. I can't get over how beautifully well written this story is. I feel like I'm right there with them; I can see every detail & feel every emotion that you pour out onto these pages. Your portrayal of Beth & Daryl is remarkable, you really reach into the depth of their souls. And with this being an AU, you still manage to keep them in character which I applaud. I feel like I'm on a journey, and I can't wait to see how it all unfolds. I know it's going to be great, because you're great, never doubt it. The only thing I ask is that you take your time with these two, this a story not to be rushed. :) Phenominal.

This was lovely! Especially the end, I cracked up. Daryl's reaction was spot-on.

Love it xxx

Aww! Love the brotp between merle abd daryl! Even though he could be a hardass Nd kinda douche, merle loves daryl, versa. :-) awww! The start of bethyl. Cos of a dog :-) wahahahaha!

I really love this! You write them really perfectly in this AU. Can't wait to see how it progresses!