PLEASE FINISH THIS I NEED IT

when is the update I need to read more of this

Concept is good but story is kinda dry

Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update this story because it is such a brilliant story and I couldn't stop reading it.

Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update this story because it is such a brilliant story and I couldn't stop reading it.

I’m so happy to hear you already have the last chapter done and even better that there’s a sequel. I’m looking forward to reading it. The wait has been long in between chapters that’s true but they are worth the wait. I love them.

Hello and thank you so much for continuing the story! It's one of my favorite fics!

Grear job!

That was an enjoyable chapter.

I liked how you went over Natasha’s current place and skill set that don’t belong on a resume. I maybe wrong, but I feel like the sun and warmth of the new day is symbolic of the warm relationship about to start between Steve and Natasha.

Natasha’s reaction to finding out that Steve was a virgin was well played and very entertaining. She was appropriately shocked, but I also got a sense of she would like to be his first.

I was not nearly as surprised by the news. Given his age, he grew up in a time well before the sexual revolution, a time where sexual promiscuity was very much so frowned upon. A girl was considered a slut and very much looked down upon if she did this. The social pressures not to do it before marriage was very different then it is today. It is nice and realistic that Steve would still have those old-fashion values. I could see him not telling the other guys especially billionaire playboy Tony Stark. He would probably fix the ‘problem’ by hiring a prostitute, after he stopped laughing that is.

I liked some of the humor in this too like Natasha suggesting Steve is gay or the ‘god help me’ and the response, Thor is in Asguard. Quite humorous.

This story is off to a great start.

Am really enjoying this story. Hope you can post an update soon, really want to know what happens next.

I really liked this! Hope you can finish it!

great chapter thanks for the read. I got the feeling g natasha will start to push Steve away soon

So happy you updated, Another great chapter that left me wanting more :D

I came across this story again after so much time and i was pleasantly surprised it had an update yay! Yeah hope you can find your muse to continue this story

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
"Wait." Natasha called and reached out, her hand grabbing around his wrist. "Please don't leave. I'm sorry, I'm just... shocked."Steve sat back down, Natasha's hand still on his arm. His eyes where fiery, as his anger at exposing such a vulnerable part of himself simmered below the surface. He looked at Natasha's face and saw the softening of her features, there was no malice or humor in them, only genuine concern. This effectively stopped Steve's anger."Can we talk about this later?" He for once was not teasing or overly cool towards him and simply nodded. They finished their breakfast quickly after that and headed back to Natasha's car. Once they were seated she turned her eyes to him."I'm sorry, I just can't believe that a guy that looks like you would have never..." Natasha trailed off."Well believe it." He answered with a bite of impatience and anger in his voice. Catching the look on her face he softened his tone and explained."Did you go and see the Captain America exhibition? I didn't always look like this. I was short, skinny and I looked like a 14 year old until the treatment. Afterwards it was all the war effort and there was no time for romance. And now women are much more interested in the physical side of things and I'm...""Just at a loss." Natasha finished. "But there wasn't anyone? Anyone at all?""There was this one girl and we kissed but then ..." Steve divulged."Right. And so now...""Now I'm here in world that I'm not a part of with no idea with what to do. I'm an old fashioned kind of man, Romanoff. I believe in love and waiting until I'm married before I make love to a woman. I don't fit in." Steve confided."Well do you want to try to adjust to this world? A bit of good old fashioned courtship mixed with modern ... benefits?" Natasha suggested."Benefits?" Steve questioned."Well... someone teaching you about modern dating and modern intimacy." She advised."Like who? Stark? Sam? I don't exactly want to tell them about it. It was hard enough to admit it to you.""Well then how about me?" Natasha mused."You? Why?""Well I've got time and who else would know better what a modern woman wants than a modern woman?" Natasha justified."What is in it for you? I know you, Romanoff. You don't do things without a ulterior motive." Steve questioned."I'm sick of sitting around trying to figure out what to do with myself. Besides, it will be fun.""Fun?""Just think of all the new ways I get to tease you." Natasha joked. Seeing the look on Steve's face she smiled mischievously. "I didn't say it would be fun for you."Steve rolled his eyes slightly as they pulled up in front of his apartment block. He cast a glance over at her and shook his head."I know I'm going to regret this but ok. We'll give it a try. You get to teach me about modern women. God help me." Steve vowed."Thor is back in Asgard, Rogers. Besides I thought this was just between us?" Natasha taunted."Romanoff." Steve warned, opening the car door."I'm just teasing, Rogers. Your first lesson starts tonight. And call me Natasha."

A shepherd had a faithful dog, called Sultan, who was grown very old, and had lost all his teeth. xD

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
"it sounds like you've had some adventures. Meet anyone interesting?" Natasha queried."Not this again, Romanoff." He sighed."Not what?" she asked innocently."This. Trying to set me up and find me dates. I told you before that I'm too busy." He replied tersely."Maybe before, but you are back in town now. No job, no mission and no excuse. So why not?" She corrected."Because I'm not interested.""So you and Wilson?" She whispered, amazed."What?" Steve asked, confused."Well you two seem very close and I'm happy for yo.." Natasha started before Steve cut her off."What? NO! You think that Sam and I?" He exclaimed, shocked."Well if not Sam then is there some other..." She started."Romanoff I'm not into men. I like women" Steve declared with authority."Well then what is it? You're not into men, you have the time and inclination so what is it?" Natasha pressed."You aren't going to let this go, are you?" Steve frowned."No. I'm a top spy and interrogator for a reason and I will find out, Rogers." She teased."Fine. But you can't tell anyone." He relented at gestured for her to lean in so he could whisper he answer to her. She leaned close to him, her long red hair brushing against his arm briefly before she pushed it behind her ear."I'm still single because..." He paused and blushed slightly red, noticing that her eyes where glued to his face. "Because I'm a virgin."Natasha was speechless. She pulled back from Steve and let her eyes wander over his face and body. He was tall, toned with a chiseled jaw and amazing blue eyes. He was attractive, very attractive in the whole sexy boy next door kind of way and she was just wasn't comprehending what he said."Are you serious? How? Why?" Natasha blurted out."I shouldn't have told you." Steve hissed and rose to stand."Wait." Natasha called and reached out, her hand grabbing around his wrist. "Please don't leave. I'm sorry, I'm just... shocked."Steve sat back down, Natasha's hand still on his arm. His eyes where fiery, as his anger at exposing such a vulnerable part of himself simmered below the surface. He looked at Natasha's face and saw the softening of her features, there was no malice or humor in them, only genuine concern. This effectively stopped Steve's anger."Can we talk about this later?" He for once was not teasing or overly cool towards him and simply nodded. They finished their breakfast quickly after that and headed back to Natasha's car. Once they were seated she turned her eyes to him."I'm sorry, I just can't believe that a guy that looks like you would have never..." Natasha trailed off."Well believe it." He answered with a bite of impatience and anger in his voice. Catching the look on her face he softened his tone and explained."Did you go and see the Captain America exhibition? I didn't always look like this. I was short, skinny and I looked like a 14 year old until the treatment. Afterwards it was all the war effort and there was no time for romance. And now women are much more interested in the physical side of things and I'm...""Just at a loss." Natasha finished. "But there wasn't anyone? Anyone at all?""There was this one girl and we kissed but then ..." Steve divulged."Right. And so now...""Now I'm here in world that I'm not a part of with no idea with what to do. I'm an old fashioned kind of man, Romanoff. I believe in love and waiting until I'm married before I make love to a woman. I don't fit in." Steve confided."Well do you want to try to adjust to this world? A bit of good old fashioned courtship mixed with modern ... benefits?" Natasha suggested."Benefits?" Steve questioned."Well... someone teaching you about modern dating and modern intimacy." She advised."Like who? Stark? Sam? I don't exactly want to tell them about it. It was hard enough to admit it to you.""Well then how about me?" Natasha mused."You? Why?""Well I've got time and who else would know better what a modern woman wants than a modern woman?" Natasha justified."What is in it for you? I know you, Romanoff. You don't do things without a ulterior motive." Steve questioned."I'm sick of sitting around trying to figure out what to do with myself. Besides, it will be fun.""Fun?""Just think of all the new ways I get to tease you." Natasha joked. Seeing the look on Steve's face she smiled mischievously. "I didn't say it would be fun for you."Steve rolled his eyes slightly as they pulled up in front of his apartment block. He cast a glance over at her and shook his head."I know I'm going to regret this but ok. We'll give it a try. You get to teach me about modern women. God help me." Steve vowed."Thor is back in Asgard, Rogers. Besides I thought this was just between us?" Natasha taunted."Romanoff." Steve warned, opening the car door."I'm just teasing, Rogers. Your first lesson starts tonight. And call me Natasha."

Money is his God. T_T