I do have to mention that your story is okay, but its not the best thing I've read. Some constructive criticisms are going to be written here. Firstly, the attitude between the characters is out of character. While I do get your justifications for them both being sad, their characters are hard to sit down and read through. They're both boring. There could be way more going on besides what's written here.

Secondly, while you have a good excuse for Vicky being in Timmy's home and conveniently had the parents away, the idea falls flat because you your execution of the story is not well done. It feels like there's something lacking from the story. It has no oomph. Nothing to keep me reading other than interactions which aren't that great already.

Thirdly, Ive noticed in parts of the story where you have just skimmed through conversations or things between the characters. For example, in Chapter 5 you specifically skipped Vicky and Timmy's talk in the living room and just ended the chapter. That begs the question, "What was the point of her going in there anyway?" If you dont have a reason for her going in there other than she can't sleep, then that's a problem. You gotta give scenes more meaning and thought. That could have been a tipping point for bonding between the both of them, but you just wrote it off. Your story has to have a sense of purpose, but the only plot that we have to go by is that she broke her leg and is living with Timmy.

Your story is coming off as wanting to be a Hurt/Comfort and fluff fic, but it fails in delivery. Im not gonna roast you or anything but you need to be aware of how your story is being received by others. The common normie reader(Who only read a couple of stories and are never heard from again) doesn't care about the stuff I'm talking about, but the more avid readers like me notice that there are a lot of issues with your story that could have been addressed and prevented if you had someone helping you.

Ill try to grade it from what I think:
Pacing: 7 out of 10
Hook: 9 out of 10
Plot: 6 out of 10
Characters: 5 out of 10
Interactions: 5 out of 10
Purpose: 5 out of 10
Chapter Length: 8 out of 10
Dialogue: 6 out of 10
Mood of story: Dark, Depressed, Sad the entire time with very minor fluff. If going for a depressed story: 7 out of 10. If going for a fluff story: 4 out of 10.

Overall, the story is okay, but could have been handled better. I cant continue reading simply because its boring, depressing, and can't keep my interest. Ive tried to read it during the past three days but I keep putting my phone back down because I just cant get into this story. I'd suggest looking up writing references to help you write better and to have a more consistent and effective quality.

Have a good day.

Why are you so prideful about spelling the name wrong? Lol. You sound like a kid who got caught with his hand in the cookie jar. Just own up to it bro. It's an honest mistake. Dont sit here and try to play it off as if you always knew.

I enjoyed this, up till the jason business. That put a bad taste in my mouth that never really went away.

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You almost made me smack my monitor's screen at that part of Jason and Vicki, but I endured it, if Timmy could, then for the sake of finishing the story I could. But alas, it was a nice story, never expected myself to be wandering on this section on ff, but I don't regret it, it's pleasant to break the routine from the Manga/Anime section.

I just read this straight through from the first chapter. Couldn't stop, because it was to good.

What the hell leave it at that? Do they get married? Have kids? Does Timmy go to College?

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couple of days ago I suddenly got really into the idea of Timmy and Vicky having a romantic relationship, I’ve read around 15 stories so far, and while most of them were good, this is the only one so good I felt the need to leave a comment. Thank you for writing such a wonderful, and wel thought out, story. :)

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