Well we'll well, would you look at that? This truly is cute and unique and I enjoy it, I can't wait so see what happens next. Thanks for the good read

Addicting! Hope you continue to update this, I've definitely enjoyed it.

Loving it keep up the good work ️

Well...I think she was stupid for staying and stupidfor letting this guy take her sister so easily. But I’m reading on.

I'm glad that as an author you're going back and updating your writing but as a reader that hasn't been here from the first upload I find it unfortunate that I can't read the old chapters as you fix them up. While I am one of those people who can be a huge stickler for proper grammar, I still wish that I had access to chapters 7-30 something, even if they aren't up to your standards. Normally I wouldn't mind since I could just read another story but the plot line of this is really interesting to me and I feel like I was left on a bit of a cliff hanger: hopefully I'll remember to check in on the progress of your chapter fixes cause I really want to keep reading.

to everyone confused in the comments if any of you see this, i’m currently in the process of rewriting the first 20 or so chapters & yes there will be some changes but the overall storyline will stay more or less the same. until then some chapters will be missing as i fix them. check out the last chapter for the authors note if u have more questions :o)

wheres chapters 6 7 and 8?

Im so confused now the story on how they met was slightly changed to? What is going onnnnnnn?

Whats up with chapter 9? How did it skip fowards to finding the group and getting a letter but also skip backwards to before the prison fell? Im so confused.

Where arechapter 6 and 7 and 8?

Awesome story :D

I was so nervous that this was going to be an AN saying you were quitting this story, so glad that is not the case! In regards to your concerns I like Jaspers name (it was different but not crazy different) and the title (while I agree "what does it mean") has become something that sticks in my brain and I got "oh that stories been updated yay! Instead of going "which one was that again?" So I wouldn't change either, but in the end it is utterly up to you. I also want to just say thank you for not quitting this story, that's been happening a lot to me since a certain something happened in the show, but I believe the best thing we can do as fans of Carl Grimes is continue his story (even if Scott Gimple ended it - like the fucking moron he is) so thank you for your dedication, it's very appreciated!

Please don’t change Jaspers name

*cue the ugly sobs* I DIDNT NEED TO RELIVE THE PAAAAIIIIIIINNNNNN! Ok, I’m cool, I’m cool... I’m just gonna start the new year off right by crying my self to sleep...it was still an amazing chapter though!

Trying to do my best as a fan to spread the word: Petitions are swarming all across the internet to fire Scott Gimple (also known as the man who killed Carl) let's show the world how powerful a fandom can be! Sign your name and get justice for Carl's untimely demise! 70,000 fans and counting are banning together not only in anger over the character death but also the unfair treatment of the actor (seriously who says "we're keeping you for at least the next three years" then fires you two weeks before your 18th birthday?) boo Scott Gimple you suck as a human being! #FireScottGimpleOrWeRiot!