| Reviews for My Mate, The Veela |
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   Jissy2013 chapter 1 . 10/26/2014 Love it |
| mattcun chapter 1 . 7/9/2014 nice |
| PhoenixSong235 chapter 1 . 6/15/2014 okay I haven't even started reading the story yet and I love your disclaimer! ...more later _ |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/22/2014 I like the Veela idea but your romance is a bit fast, other than that everything else was ok ! The Crimson Mage. P.S: Google say's it Earth day today so Happy Earth Day ! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/21/2014 Is there any particular reason that you have forgone most punctuation? The lack of quotation marks (" ") makes it most difficult to discern the dialogue. |
| Amras2007 chapter 1 . 4/22/2014 I think you should do something to distinguish speech, you can use quotation marks "..." so that it is less confusing. Other than that I liked it ) |
