Love it

I like this plot line very much. You've hooked me. Can't wait to continue. Very sad that Nama died. I liked her. Was hoping for some Dwalin love there.

The whole story with the sword and then adding Fili with the mithril magic was brilliant. I swear the whole pick up the sword, proclaim leadership, kill comrades then die... only to be repeated 3000 times was priceless.

What a nice ending. Everyone got their gold star for doing what they needed to. YIPPEEEE.
I am glad An is doing better, being bossy is her thing, can't take it away from her.
But now I am sad...only one more story to go? Where is that new one you were thinking of?
In the immortal words of Golum "we wants it".

AGAIN? Why do you want to make me cry?

I think this is a great way to become king...you dad is not dead and he can help you muddle through your first few years by sending messages back and forth. come on Fjalar, it is perfect!

Well, An is not 100%...hmmm.
I am happy that everyone seems OK with this new plan...well, Dwalin has some issues, and Bofur seems sad. maybe they will all go with him and leave the mountain to the young folk. No one says they can't visit regularly!

Nice Dwalin and Beka part, as well as Beka and Fjalar.

And then what Dwalin said to Nyr was sweet too.

wow...Fili is sending Kili to blaze a trail for him and will hand the reins over to Fjalar. At least this way they won't be parted for long. That makes me feel better.
And I am so glad that An woke up on her own, since Fili just decided not to use the mithril stuff again.
And that was sweet that she woke in Fili's arms, I know if I was going to come out of a coma that is where I would want to end up!

Yep, all is well OUTSIDE the mountain, but Fili is not going to be happy when he gets home. FIX AN!

ohhh, will the two elves go to the Shire?
And looks like everyone knows Nyr has a bun in the oven. ha ha.
Oh wow, that meeting with Fjalar and Fili...heart wrenching - and how he asked about An and Gunz.
I think he was more proud of him than angry, but I be there will be a talking to later on. ha ha.
the way the dwarves fought like one was cool. Fjalar is getting pretty good. And Skirfir is still awesome. But Fili and Kili...watch out! They are on fire!
Yah, best go get that sword back.

Gunz is trying so hard to be brave and big and take care of his mom...but he is just a little lad and hurting himself.

and Skirfir is such an awesome dwarf, "my life for yours" what a guy!

Yep, that sword is doing its job all right. Eeep.

Awwww I loved the brotherly love stuff, how Kili took care of Fili this time, big change there, but I think it is important that they take turns, ha ha.

and why on earth was Fili so set on the TAN shirt? ha ha.

Nyr has some thinking to do and love the baby's name! and that thing about him being a brew master, FUNNY...you will have to write a one shot for that.

Oh good, I am glad that Fili and Dwalin got their rings back, nice that they had enough to make two, even if they were smaller.

Loved Beka’s promotion. And yep, Fjalar will be her kind one day.

HA! Beka and I think alike. (or like you since you wrote it) they SHOULD use the healing ring to save An.

Wow, your sword worked Fili….now run like the wind!

Holly cow, Fili and Dwalin almost got trampled to death. Good thing Rohan horses can jump. Ha ha.
Yes, tell them NOT to touch a blade, smart, we only want the enemy to have that, not the good guys.

I loved Bard’s words when he spotted Fjalar! Too funny!

YIPPPEEEEE, Fili and Kili are back together again and safe. Now I can go to bed and read more tomorrow…I couldn’t stop till I knew they were free.

Eomer is impressed with the ravens. Bet he wishes he had a raven speaker in Rohan. Ha ha.

Loved Corax’s little snit. Ha ha. Too cute.

DANG woman! Why did you have to go and make me so sad there with them all talking to their mom. You better find a way to make her better….like they did with Dwalin!

Oh wow….that is some sword you just made and the curse that went with it.
And EVERYONE felt the mountain work for you Fili. Impressive.

Nice work with the true circle thing. Now they know a little more.

Nooooo, don’t go outside the mountain Fjalar! You are kind of the king now and I do recall your dad saying you could not leave the mountain if he was gone. BUT…we know you are going to go, so why bother trying to stop you. Just get it done fast and good and then take the flack later.

Ha ha ha, wild ride for dwaves.
Beorn’s son? Awwww, now who did Beorn marry? He said he was the last, but I see from looking on line he DID have a son…so who was his wife?

That was nice of Eomer. We like him.

Yes, Rock throwers were PREY! KILL!

Oh boy, Beka and Mieth are doing a great job. Yep, Raven Prince comes…with help!

Fili does sound like he knows his way around a forge…does that mean YOU do too, or did you just do research? Ha ha.

Now Dwalin is there to help Fili…yippee, and he knows they don’t have Gunz. But he does not know Gunz will be all right….now An is still a worry.

Now what is a Tyrfing blade?