Reviews for Demonstuck |
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![]() ![]() ![]() *Hyperventilating.* Must... Read... More...! Why is there no more?! |
![]() ![]() This is easily one of the best demon!stuck fics I've ever started reading, and it's different from what I expected. I expected for Karkat to be the first troll John encounters, or perhaps Vriska, or Terezi, however Kanaya makes the most sense with her compatibility with a little sunlight, and her willingness to hear something out before killing it. Like John xD Please do keep updating, it's coming along great cx |
![]() ![]() There were some spelling errors (like calling OJ AJ) but I really like it. Write more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I suggest reviewing for the occasional grammar mistake. Otherwise fairly exceptional, though it didn't quite have the same mood as the first chapter. Perhaps you could have a scene during the troll's village massacre. |
![]() ![]() ![]() DAAAAAAAAAMN! Write more you dope! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your wr1t1ng styl3 1s gr3at, and now 1 am sad, but 1n a good way. 1 assum3 that was th3 a1m of th1s chapt3r? |