Not long enough thanks for the read

Beautifully written and far more in keeping with the relationship they had before Jane killed RJ (and after, if you include that he kept the relationship alive via letters). This would have been a far superior direction after MBH than the show's writers took. Thank you for writing it.

I love this ficlet so much. It's my drug. When I can't find any new fics to read this is my old go to. Ahhh I love it.

I think you should continue this...

This is beautifully written. The characterization and content are wonderful. Mission accomplished! Hopeful respite beautifully provided...

I loved this! It was perfect! I loved that you let us into Jane's thoughts about why he planed everything out the way he did. Some of those things had came to my mind as well:) Great job! As for your thanks, you are more than welcome! I am glad I was of some help:)

That was just beautiful. You seem to fit perfectly inside Jane's mind. Why didn't TPTB consult you before bringing Pike into the mix. One more chapter would be nice but no pressure.

Great story loved how Pike didn't existed and maybe you could continue writing this story pretty please

This is amazing and wonderful and so very much more in keeping with the manner in which I wish things were rolling out in canon. Thank you!

"Don't drool on me." That line made the story ... it say's everything about Jane & Lisbon and the fact that they should, and will, be together.

Very cute. Would have been nice to see something like this on the show...

Lovely! You're right, things have been weird between them because their relationship requires changes that they are resisting. So thank you for giving them that push here.

Lovely sentiment. I too would rather see Jane and Lisbon help each other heal, but we're not going to get that so thanks. This is what Jane needs. And probably what Lisbon needs, too (to be successful in "fixing" someone)

So well done and in character. I love fiction where I can see ans hear the characters like they appear in the show. Everything here is perfect! Please keep writing and enthralling us with your stories i will certainly keep reading.

Ooooooh! I wish there was a second chapter! This is just tooo cute!
This story made my day! Thank you!