Awesome! That was very well done! I'd like to see some more of your writing!
Speaking of shipping, I ship Riffbert, which is canon (which is kinda odd since i often don't ship canon ships) and Septibeth, which I have officially established in "Encounters". I'm going to claim rights over that, but if you want to write something containing them doing cutsy stuff, go right ahead! Btw, who's you english teacher?

Love Peace and Rock always,
RockerBabe414