Reviews for Just a Little Bit More
Yellotte chapter 1 . 10/9/2015
Yes! I Was afraid something bad might happen! Like big crisis...
That was so cute and natural. Very credible. Love it!
Don't hesitate to try a new story
redheartballoon chapter 1 . 10/1/2015
I just wanted to say, this was the most adorable story ever. I just sat there and giggled my little heart out. The characters were a perfect blend of snarky comments and angsty, misunderstood love-sickness. I created an account just to say how much I liked so. Well done.
I know okay chapter 5 . 9/13/2015
I'm happy they are together.

There might have been a few mistakes, but they were minor if I didn't remember them. I am ecstatic that I got to read something I didn't have to translate each sentence in my head.
I know okay chapter 4 . 9/13/2015
At least they are back to friends. I have to ask... What is a doona?
I know okay chapter 3 . 9/13/2015
I like the snakes. The best advice to take actually depends entirely on how Draco feels, which Harry doesn't actually know.
I know okay chapter 2 . 9/13/2015
That is awkward and heartbreaking.
I know okay chapter 1 . 9/13/2015
Very good so far.
ThoseCunningFolk chapter 5 . 8/5/2015
WONDERFUL! I was so elated to see that the fifth chapter was posted. You had me worried.

You wrapped up your story very well. I thought it was cute that they kind of came together through Draco's struggle with the potion. Even though Harry isn't great with potions, he was supportive and tried to overcome his lack of knowledge to be helpful. Actions speak louder than words ;)

You really are a great writer. You don't seem to have an overly trained style; it seems very raw and natural. With the benefit of grammar and punctuation skills. I know med school is important, but I hope to see more from you in the future!
eternalchange chapter 5 . 8/1/2015
Cute! Although the romance was lovely, my favourite bits were actually their moments of friendship, which is unusual for me since I usually read the romance stories for the romance. Thanks for the fun read :)
ThoseCunningFolk chapter 4 . 7/29/2015
This story is so cute! You executed the rise-and-fall of their relationship very well. Even when things are falling, the plot continues on. I also like that the writing has a very simple flow, but not too simplified. You have so many quirky sentences and passages riddled throughout the story that the narrative itself remains engaging.

I happened to notice that you last updated this story on July 30, 2014. It is currently July 29th, 2015. Soooo I think we should celebrate the one-year-update-anniversary tomorrow by adding a chapter five? Yes? :D
AnoGal chapter 4 . 4/7/2015
This story is so good please don't abandon it, write the last chapter instead! I love how developed your characters are, and although I am not usually a Drarry shipper, I definitely am where this story is concerned ;)

I can't wait to see how the nervous/sexual tension is going to build to a breaking point, so please complete the story and put me out of my misery!
BookLover0317538 chapter 3 . 6/3/2014
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dcfg21 chapter 3 . 5/8/2014
I can't handle how adorable this fic is. I love everything about it. Life-coaching neurotic snakes and all. Precious. Please...continue.
ForsakenMemories8650 chapter 3 . 5/6/2014
I love this story! You are totally wreaking havoc with my emotions, but I consider that a good thing. The first chapter had me laughing out loud, then the next two made me very sad. I can imagine this is all very difficult for Draco. Everything he thought he knew about himself has been flipped right on its head. As much as I hate when characters are sad, it's much more believable that there would be some major issues first before everything works out between them. I also like the idea of Harry being a reptile keeper. Snakes giving him relationship advice is a nice idea. I'm looking forward to the next update!
G-chan7 chapter 3 . 5/5/2014
Great job! I loved how you were totally original in choosing Harry's career - I've never read of him working with snakes. I must say, though, I liked the snakes themselves even more :D
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