Unfortunately I have to agree with the previous reviewer in that the dialogue here relies heavily on exposition.

I wholeheartedly applaud your efforts as I've experienced the personal hell of writing scripts, but this adaptation didn't do it for me. For instance, it makes zero sense for Bruce Sato, let alone the other MASK agents, to ever use a gun.

Totally wooden dialogue. Overstuffed with foreshadowing and forced exposition, this scene doesn'T thrill me at all. There's just no natural flow to it. Sorry, to me, this is a miss.

Good start to a great movie. I can vision this entire event on screen.

Way to go, Dusty! Now M.A.S.K. will surely grow into a force for good.

is buddy hawkes going to be in it ? the suppense it geting to me .
it's a good read and I hope they do put out a m.a.s.k. movie
susan