Author~san, I hope you update soon xD This is one of my favourite fanfictions yet! I love the story line and the pairings!

Nooooooooooooooooooooo this is a nightmare! ToT

and he wouldn't grin so easily.. it's definitely weird.

Your Jellal is Reeeeaaally OOC and it's disconcerting. He acts like a teenage boy who's lived a good life, not a miserable one. like, Jellal would not say huh, yea or guys, or act outspoken. he's an introvert.

yay your back! i have been waiting for this story to be updated for like ever lol

Awesome tnx.

Aaaaaa I can't wait to see moretbh even though you said there wese sooo many holes in this story I've been reading it over and over again but couldn't see it cause for me your story (one of the best I've read).. For me to reastart everything had so many workload but I'll give to you for your own thoughts on whether to start it again or just continue. Best of luckkk

OOOooooOhhhhHhhh RESTART AS A NEW STORY! after all, wouldn't it be nice to be able to look back at your old work?

Repost as a new story so that you can really see a diffrence.

Hiii~ WDLTTRP fan here! In my opinion, I think you should leave this as it is and restart a new story. Though I agree that you have improved greatly over the past few years and seeing how this was last updated three years ago, I think it's good to have something to look back on and remind you of where you started. Restarting this as a new story would open up fresh ideas and you'll have pointers to guide you from this old version. You'll know how you could make it better and avoid making the same mistakes you did in this one. But the decision is still up to you! No matter what, I'll be supporting you and just be thankful that you're actually sharing this amazing story with us. Thank you! May the gods of plot bunnies bless you with never-ending inspiration!

And that unison raid will go down as the greatest unison raid to ever exist! How I would love to see that in the anime. It's going to be one of the most beautiful magic ever.

Did this undergo editing? This is probably the third time I've read this story, in hopes of an update being released. As my first JeLu fic ever, I will support this story through the end. I've forgotten how much I loved this scene holy crap! Nothing beats a good confrontation and fight scenes. It's the middle of the night and I am squealing and giggling and just had a pillow thrown at me. Ah, dear me. What I wouldn't do for one of my favorite fics of all time.

I would start a new story but make sure people know its a revised version. :)

I actually really like the story as it is. There are a few plot issues but nothing extremely major. If I had to change something, I wouldn’t put Yukino on the Lite side since she isn’t an evil person.

If you feel like re-writing the story, maybe redo it chapter by chapter :) I will be following this story.

I’m slightly confused why Yukino would join Lite. I don’t peg Yukino as an evil person