When a story is very good, I always say the same thing at the end..."Where's the rest?" Waiting, not so patiently. You really have to style and quality of the show down. Love it.

Please keep writing!

I really enjoyed this and would like to read more :) Leah.

Really would love to see more of this, please post more as soon as you get the time to!

Please post more soon!

This was a really good start. I could really feel Nina's terror and Patrick's pain in her dream. The scene in bed after was also very well written. I like how aware Nina is of Patrick's loss (Gus) and how she makes allowances for it. Really great chapter, looking forward to more :)

I really loved this! I hope you'll continue soon!

Very intense story but it is so Nina and really well written however the second setting a was a little off putting, all and all a really well written story. Can't wait to see where it goes

Your fanfic is amazing, please write more also my tumblr is offspring-patrina.

This is great. I hope there will be more of it. I love reading offspring fan fiction!