Reviews for A DIC-less SI
Raiju001 chapter 11 . 7/16
This was fun! Would love to see a return to it once again to see how they eventually get the toaster back from that thieving sailor!
Tjin chapter 11 . 6/24
So... What's the name of the hentai story you mentioned?
NazgulBelserion chapter 11 . 5/21
I'm shocked he hasn't gone too a world where he can become like a vampire or something powerful easy power up lol
tarrangar chapter 1 . 4/19
Considering this is a SI, and you actually typed in a password(that I'm assuming you don't actually use) I wonder how many people, tried to log into your account with said password.
Guestinator chapter 11 . 2/27
It has now been over an entire year with no update on this amazing story at all :(
Guest chapter 11 . 12/13/2019
All hail Queen Kasumi!

To fyrewolf: the first versions of the toaster would probably be like a combination of a... (damn... ähmm. .. is an electronic map with voiced directions simply called GPS in english?) Anyway... that and a Furbie and would probably kill interest for a while
Crainium9 chapter 9 . 10/21/2019
Seems pretty good but so much is left out it’s confusing
DiveLord chapter 11 . 9/11/2019
I love SI's that just introduce a little OOC common sense and turn a characters wolds upside down.
creativesm75 chapter 11 . 7/6/2019
cool
BlazeStryker chapter 11 . 6/14/2019
If either woman Children had wound up barren, a ring of the Half-elven maid probably would have fixed things.
BlazeStryker chapter 5 . 6/14/2019
*humming to himself* ...get back up and try again...

(I do love the work of Gavin "miracleofsound" Dunne!)
BlazeStryker chapter 2 . 6/14/2019
Care Bears vs. the Mythos...

Okay, that really is going into pirates vs. ninja territory.
BlazeStryker chapter 1 . 6/14/2019
You know what I'd love? The character getting ideas off of analogues of fanfic writers then trying them out!
Treant Balewood chapter 11 . 4/22/2019
A really fun story, Thanks for Writing!
Derich chapter 10 . 4/10/2019
Thanks for the chapter!

That SI is very entertaining (I like your version of Gemna), but seems to diverge a bit from its original premise (while it is still good, it is still a shame that the original plot does not appear that often now). So, I will be hoping for a probable time-skip/training montage (with some infos about Nabiki and Akane, who are probably both in hell) before having the greatest (and unique) toaster heist of fanfiction history.
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