Nice!

Loved this story - such angst, exactly how I thought Hook would feel

This was amazing!

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so cute! I love it! ADORABLE!
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Okay, this is the second thing of yours that I've read - I am now off on a tangent and will, I suppose, be reading all of your stories with Killian...I really like the way you write.

THIS was such a beautiful piece...

As I already mentioned... you just summed up the entire thing into one... Commendable job...

Just precise things... Not stretching the feels... not making them too short...

I loved how you showed all the sides... How the curse was affecting Killian.. How he was seeing himself as a liability.. a ticking time bomb..

I loved how he spilled beans to Charming... and then how he said it to emma... now at this point nothing could be too right or too wrong.. everything is messed...

him covering his lips.. that is a complete six *going by cricket terminology* it just hits the right chrods...

amazing OS.. :D

ok...that brought a lot of tears!

I liked it. Great work.

Such a wonderful exploration of Killian's feelings and concerns and fears after 3x17! You really made me empathize with what he might well be thinking and putting himself through - just like in the show, I wanted to badly to hug him and tell him it would all work out. :) I loved how you wrote Emma here as well - returning the favor of all the times he has come back for her and not letting him go. The whole story was just lovely; you did an excellent job writing it!

I love this so much! Great job at capturing Hook's angst over what he did to Ariel, I can definitely see the show going in this direction.

I really like that she's the one running after him for a change. I also really like that she's understanding about what he did.

This was wonderful and beautiful. And I hate it because it brought up all the feels from that episode. I swear my heart broke when he chased after Not!Ariel and was in tears. It's still broken and your amazingly good story just stirred up all those emotions. Long story short, amazing job. I really enjoyed.

This was an awesome one shot and a wonderful resolution for Hook's curse. I know that it isn't "solved" necessarily in this, but you give that hope ... and everyone is on the same page about what is going on now.

wow! That was amazing! The angst was top notch, touching Killian POV, lovely moments with Charming and Emma. Made me cry, yet hope was always simmering underneath, in true ONCE style, and I the ending when it broke out was perfect! Thank you!

i am sobbing! OMFG I AM CRYING SO HARD. WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME? that was so beautiful!