Reviews for The Screw Up
Disabled account 101 chapter 4 . 2/3/2015
Update soon.
Guest chapter 4 . 5/13/2014
where is amanda?

rollins and benson!
peterpeter chapter 4 . 4/28/2014
hope alex doesn't go back to casey
Guest chapter 4 . 4/29/2014
I don't understand how everyone presses they need talk like it is not a big deal. Even worse, Casey thinks that Alex already should get over her by now. Hello, it is not over a year. The thing Casey did to Alex is a serious trauma that might cloud Alex's rest life. I doubt Alex would love and trust someone wholly again. See, Alex is holding back with Olivia. For me, There is no difference between killing someone literally and depriving the capacity of loving. And Casey still be controlled by her family. Nothing changed. At this point, talk is the only Casey's selfish behaviour to ease her mind.
Eljh55 chapter 4 . 4/27/2014
It was a dream alright. But I agree with Abbie, they both need closure to move on. Problem is they may end up liking to be together again. haha. Please update soon.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/20/2014
I don't understand what's going on. Casey and Alex have a sex? It doesn't make sense at all. It should be a dream or something.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/20/2014
Also, Alex and Olivia are being very unprofessional toward Casey, especially with Alex taking cases away from her. Alex would never do that. Alex may do a lot of things but she would never sabotage someone's career.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/19/2014
This story seems to have a very good plot, but the way it's written makes it very hard to read. For one, everyone is very out of character. This isn't how they would act toward each other. For example in chapter 1 when Olivia screamed at Casey and called her an asshole. Olivia would never just blow up like that. Another thing, is that this story is rushing. There aren't enough details or background. It just went straight from Casey leaving Alex to fleeing the wedding to moving in with her parents to 4 months later. There are not enough explanations and details and that makes it 1. Hard to keep up with 2. Unrealistic. If you would just slow down a bit and make the characters more like themselves, this would be a really good story!
Jbcjazz chapter 3 . 4/21/2014
I hope Alex and Oliva stay together in this especially how bad Casey hurt her.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/17/2014
I get Casey's fear regarding family, but leaving her fiance at the altar without words are horrible, even she proposed Alex. If she didn't know how to handle or get over fear that her family would disown her, she should not have proposed Alex in the first place. She can deny her identity until her death, but she dragged Alex into mess and pain in the name of love then ran. What kind of person is she? Love is feeling, also love is will. We can fall in love at the first sight, but we have to fight to keep the love alive and stronger. Please update soon.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/17/2014
I have waited for updating. Thank you.
Azuky chapter 2 . 4/18/2014
Nice!'casey can't keep lying to herself.
Eljh55 chapter 2 . 4/17/2014
Both of them are lying to themselves. Deep inside they knew that the only person that can make them happy is each other. Please update soon.
zig zag chapter 1 . 4/14/2014
i like it..update please...
Guest chapter 1 . 4/13/2014
Please continue or update soon. I am so hooked up already!
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