This is great! I would love to see it continued one day.

Great story! You are a wonderful writer! I have read all three of your stories and greatly enjoyed them! I hope you update this one soon! I love the idea of the Doctor being the son of Rassillon! This definitely a different take on the story but I think its awesome!

Hellooooo!
Eu acompanho suas outras histórias e gostaria de saber se você vai continuar com esta? É diferente de todas as histórias que li no site!
Aguardo ansiosamente pela próxima atualização!
Boas inspirações para você!
E que a força esteja com você! ;)

so excited for next chapter!

Thank you for updating, it's such a lovely story!

Well done. :)

I have to say, this story is so sweet and amazing! Love it!

Oh, please update! I can't stand to wait! Absolutely fantastic story, really. I have to know what happens next! Especially after Pete gets over his shock... Mwa ha ha (evil laugh). Ooh, and Jackie's reaction...

OMG, amazing story so far! I ship it so much, I just... Yay! Sorry, I'm not making any sense. Fangirl moment. :)

Loved it! I wonder what Rassilon is up to. Does he know what the doctor has done? Or has he just calling his wayward son home? Why was the alarm going off at the prison? What of the time lords possibly fear? Daleks? Or was it human rebels?

I'll definitely tune in next week (or whenever you post next) to find out what happens. Bum Bum Bum!

Thanks for posting. This was great.

awesome, keep going!

Hooray! Good update!

Glad to see you're back. Well done.

Ahhhhhhh!

Well that's not good, things are about to get bad! Good chapter!