This was an amazing story even with all the mistakes. Run it through on Chrome it is free to use that way. I actaully write my chapters on the site.

The mans smile returned "I see Harry that is good, May I ask something of you?" Harry nodded his head slowly "How long have you be able to speak Parsaltonuge" He said in a kind grand father like voice.

Parseltongue is the correct spelling.

If the grandmother died when Harry was 6 and it was 3 years later he is now 9 not eight.

It is number 12, I know you put the address in chapter 3 but forgot to fix it in chapter 2.

The Prophecy, little over a year ago, he was interviewing a promising new Divination Professor, even though he himself found little use for the Subject. The Prophecy protected that a child, bore of those who had thrice defied the Dark Lord, would be birthed on the eve of the seven month. That the Dark Lord would mark him as not only his equal, but the child would have powers he could never know. This pair would evade death, unless it came from the hands of the other, that this child has the power to vanquish the Dark Lord.

Predicted and born. Otherwise a great first chapter.

Great, enjoyed the story

Hermione is so arrogant

Great story, fun read. Thanks for sharing your talent.

just one wordamazing

Great story even the second time through. My only suggestion is to go back through and edit it. Thanks.
BlueberryBabe

Why make Sirius smoke?

Werewolves cannot sire or give birth to a werewolf!

So where did Percy sleep?

And what is with the Christmas party? Total stupidity!

If Charles Potter was murdered by Voldemort in 1989 -and Harry had sent him to wraith form in 1981, how did Voldemort murder Charles and why didn't Harry live with him after Harry's parents were murdered?

Summoning magic - accio

Chudley Cannons

Great ending even if the snakes won the house cup.

Harry will always belong to the house of the lion, even if he is the heir to the house of the snake. That will be something he can use against Malfoy and Snape.