this story is way to drawn out. it honestly isnt worth reading.
ive searched a lot but nowhere could i find any reference to a naag snake.
the british prime minister is in the know of the magical world then surely the royal family is aswell. and yes you're right they are more of a figure head for international politics then for law making. sure they have some say but not a lot

what the actual fuck. what kind of shopkeeper gets intimidated by a 6 year old growling...

if one has lived through 6 change of season they are 1,5 years old as there are 4 seasons a year.
isnt this rather obvious?

how the fuck does a 5 year old save world leaders? they dont die all that frequently and if they do its more likely they are bad then good. best he can do is call their ambassy, how? from a payphone he cant reach? as if they gonna take a 5 year old serious

do you really need to repeat a rephrase everything 3 times? god what a lot of words without progress

he is being called useless by death and finds that unflattering.
why? he is a god ofc you are useless, more then that helping riddle die was all luck and fate nothing you did yourself

so harry cheated death twice, i fail to see how, 2 killing curses first time it was his mother helping him survive and the second was sacreficing riddles piece.
how is this different from using magic to conjure stone and block the curse or pushing someone in front of you to take the curse?
according to you as soon as the curse is fired if you dont drop dead you hsve cheated. sure the difference is in that both times the curse hit but at no time did he break the rules to survive he mearly just very obscure magic

Thank you for a very enjoyable chapter.

Ur killing Sirius! WHY

This is amazing! I love how this progresses, and how much Harry refuses at first to do something. And then, when he 'interrogates' Death (Ignotus, Death) it's just - beautiful!

Well, this fiction is quite fantastic, and I find it sad that you abandonned it :s I hope one day you'll start writing once more this fiction, and I may help as a beta, but don't hope too much xD

Are you done with this story? It's really good and I would love to see how it would continue.

Not bad still reading though. Looking forward to finishing the book.

Ok, this seemed really bad. Why did you suddenly decide his name was Hadrian. First it's almost always incredibly stupid to change the main character's name. Second, his father was James. Why do you think it makes sense for his name to suddenly be Roman Hadrian. If you changed the setting to where he was a Black then it would make sense.

If you wanted a more realistic name you should have named him Henry or Harold. Both would be old names of royalty, and for both Harry is the common nickname.

great story can't wait for more!