It took me forever to find this fic again, because I thought it would looks more of the monkey lie in the tags, and I thought that would be classified as crossover with Narnia therefore… All of my searches except for this one left me unable to locate it, still it's a good story, Grecian helped me find it. :)

I love this story!

I was so surprised and happy to see Aslan in the first chapter. Aslan in an FMA fanfic is something I never knew I needed in my life until now.

Your portrayal of the characters is spot-on. You make the reader love every single one of them. Even Glundil / Gluttony ( who always creeped the heck out of me in the manga/anime ) is cute and lovable. Greed's my favorite homunculus and Envy's a close second, so I was glad to find that you do them both justice.

You have a great style of writing that's fun to read and keeps you wanting more. I especially enjoy your take on the characters' thought processes. You give them each a unique voice and way of thinking, so I'd be able to tell whose point of view it is even if you didn't say in the author's note.

I also like the way you stick to your beliefs while writing. As a fellow Christian, I really appreciate and respect that.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :)

Isnt it time for Lust to choose what she wants to be? She's 14.

Xan you describe how they look, now. like do they still look the same, just children?

Aslan Isnt that Narnia?

Holy shit. This is amazing. I just read this entire thing in less than two hours. Wowza.

Holy old man fu! This is pretty cool beans!

Aslan is just Turkish for Lion.

That was awesome! Greatly done. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Good luck with it.

Ah, don't sweat it. I was busy anyways.

*growls* Envy...why must you be so stupid? Although he seemed good for a second...

I await your update!

please update soon. I really loved the first chapter, and I like the whole thing and know it will only get better.

Hurrraaaaayy! A new chapter!
Greed being in shock after killing is an awesome touch. Didn't expect that and emphasizes his humanity. Poor Lucia though! D:
And Ender... I feel sorry for him. But it's a really, really good thing he's got that PTSD going on. He needs a weakness or he'd be impossible to control. o_o

ooh whats he gonna do now! hehe thx for posting :) now i'm really curious- greed and envy and lust and pretty much everyone keeps on referencing amestris, so will they ever make it back to where they belong? or, where they're from, i guess? its anyone's call where they really belong after their memories have been returned. i guess its difficult, being caught between two different histories in two different worlds... but greed really has changed, i'll give you that much :) can't wait for the next chapter!

Well, it looks like Envy still might actually be of the good side.

Ooh, things are getting interesting!

...I have a feeling that Lucia is going to bitchsmack Envy.