was this flashback brought to us by the fine people at KIA? If so please share with the other authors how to get corporate sponsorship of that level for fanfictions lol

Great chapter! Can't wait till the next chapter! :D

love it

I guess I can check this story out

You fucking author's need to stop blaming Minato for the way Naruto was treated by the villager's and shinobi it is not his fault. It is theirs and the Third Homage fault.

Less interesting.
I dislike body aging fic. I prefer naruto physically stay at his age.

Great story so far

Good chapter :D
I thought naruto turn his mindscape into the usual forest, but no, he choose konoha, getting kyuubi a kind of revenge (naruto too, he must hate more than 99.99% of konoha)

Good chapter.
The chapter didn't have much of plot development but was good.

Hope you would update soon.

Regards
Adharsh.

Keep updating soon

Spell check, man. If your title is misspelled along with all the other stuff that's misspelled, it's a serious turn-off.

Also, your formatting is pretty bad. Space out paragraphs and avoid text walls.

Is this going to be a gender bend fic because if it isn't your going to have to fix your character list because you put Naruko instead of naruto.

It needs better spacing, and it's fast. Other than that it was good

Wait... This is a male naruto story so why are the character tag is NARUKO?

Great job keep it up update soon