Reviews for The Ugly Fox |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Omg. Please please come back and update this awesome story soon |
![]() ![]() please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() can u plz update when u can |
![]() ![]() Please do update soon - |
![]() ![]() ![]() Want more please so good |
![]() ![]() ![]() So...this is how it all started huh? Now we just need their first encounter face to face |
![]() ![]() ![]() stupid sasuke, you didn't even help naruto! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bullying is a horrible thing, but at least someone helped Naruto out |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I can't wait until the next chapter comes out. |
![]() ![]() I really enjoyed the first chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() please reread what you write or get a beta. I'm not trying to be rude but wrongly placed punctuation marks and incomplete sentences made this hard to read. Read the last line of the story. That could have been 3 sentences but you made it into one. It almost made no sense what so ever because there were some word missing. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Like the story but its little confuse for me...please update soon... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mmm...u need to work on ur senteces so that it will be better understood but other than that it was a good chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please reread your chapter, there are many word mistakes and it makes your story hard to understand. |