Reviews for a second chance |
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Rebmul chapter 8 . 2/7/2017 so you turned him into a trap this is random as fuck you think he would have been told this before being sent back although you probably got a lot of shit for this which is probably the reason its not been updated. |
masonstoner44 chapter 8 . 1/26/2017 okay, so this chapter made no sense are you trying to say that Harry's biological parents are lily and Amelia? because that is impossible you can't biologically have two moms. and if that's not the case then how did harry get genetics from Amelia |
draco122 chapter 8 . 10/18/2016 wow that was intense. I loved it. I love this i can't wait for more. Draco122 |
hunzbookwyrm chapter 8 . 9/8/2016 Great stort hope to see more soon |
Luiz4200 chapter 8 . 6/25/2015 For some reason, I find the idea of Sirius Black being a bad guy more unbearable than James Potter being a bad guy. |
magicanimegurl chapter 8 . 3/2/2015 Is there more? This feels open ended. I like it though. Update and write on! |
ame9515 chapter 8 . 10/10/2014 Hmmmmmmmmm! Interesting...VERY INTERESTING! |
arober94 chapter 8 . 9/12/2014 This isn't the best story ever, but it is interesting. I like the idea of this. |
x30303 chapter 8 . 9/9/2014 well thats one hell of a twist I like it |
ToddGilliss chapter 8 . 8/26/2014 time to bring this story up to date |
sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 7 . 8/21/2014 Very ridiculous twist. |
sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 1 . 8/21/2014 Pathetic Harry. One on one, he lost to the Weaselette after the Weasel and the Beaver were out of the fight already. You should add angst to your genre. |
lovegoodbooks chapter 8 . 8/19/2014 Genius please keap updating |
ToddGilliss chapter 2 . 8/13/2014 50 potions to help, not held grew 2 feet? for 3' 5' TO 5'5'? |
Linda chapter 8 . 8/6/2014 Your story line is good but its getting very confusing, and goes to quickly you need to slow down and add details. |