whooop bery nice i like it! :D

I don't really get the time line because when Ichigo and Grimmjow were being intimate, it seemed like they've known each other for a while. But then Renji's call made it more like it was their first encounter, when Grimmjow saved Ichigo from those 2 girls.

Do we get a second serving of this? Because it was amazing :3

This is interesting... :)
Question though, Ichigo seems to hate girls, so does than mean the girls won't be included here, the twins to be exact?

For being your first GrimmIchi its was great! I really enjoyed it. i honestly was looking for a one-shot not something that takes 10 chapters to get to the actual yaoi. :)

I also forgot to mention this in the disclaimer, so I'll do it now. I also don't own the song lyrics used in the story.

This is really good, i have high hopes for this and it may get really interesting if more characters are added to it. Continuing with how it is though would be good as its simple and enjoyable. Worth a look at if a grimmichi fan

Well done. So good, I had to read it twice, haha! Here's hoping for more!