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Absolutely love the story, how it combines ideas from both the books and the movies is masterful. In criticism I have two things. I wish your antagonists were more 3 dimensional. As of yet they seem very cliche. Also, I'd like to see how Greg acts at home as a teen, you could have an entire subplot with Manny and Roderick. Just suggestions, great story so far, though

Hi I enjoy reading your fanfiction. I think this chapter was really funny, especially when Greg found the photo. I am curious why Holly break up with Greg, it looked like they were such a nice couple. Hope you update soon.

this story gets better and better

i think it is a really good story

awsome

i think it is great

Please update soon. I really want to see where you go with this.
Question: will Greg eventually take another shot at taking holly out?
And what's with Greg leaving his room as holly entered

i really hope you update soon i really like this fanfiction a lot.
Question: do you think you plan on having holly and greg get together anytime soon? i ship them so much and it is such a shame that there are a limited amount of stories where they are featured let alone together.

Wow, the thing with the pet names is so funny! Can't wait!

YOURE THE BEST FANFIC WRITER EVER!

The story is amazing so far! Can't wait read to read the next ch.! (nice pic zerofrhyme, by the way xD)

This story is so good! Appreciate the Greg/Holly cliffhanger tho(!) I NEED GREG AND HOLLY TO GET TOGETHER! Angie and Matthews relationship is hilarious! Please please please update soon coz this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read... One thing; can u like describe the characters and their appearances more... Coz I can't imagine the OCs or even the original characters... Please update soon!

Wow, this is a really good fanfic. I'm enjoying it so far, especially The Untouchables reference, because I have seen the movie :). And the best part about this fanfic is that it's different from others I've read...Greg is in Crossland Highschool instead of middleshcool. Great plot, very well done and written/typed, hannibal1996! Can't wait to read chapter 6.

Nice ending.