| Reviews for M-BHMUMSKM(Y)YKKTKAHM |
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   healeroffates chapter 5 . 8/12/2019 Do your thing! If it's going to be better than what you have currently then I can't wait! |
| Littlest1 chapter 1 . 1/28/2018 You missed 56 and 81 |
| Sasuke75249 chapter 4 . 8/22/2016 nice what happens next |
| xOSilverRavenOx chapter 2 . 4/5/2016 please please update soon I love this story and can't wait to read more |
| Tatsumi08 chapter 4 . 2/15/2016 Update |
| Tatsumi08 chapter 4 . 2/15/2016 Please Update |
| NaruhinaloverUA chapter 4 . 7/6/2015 Nice and interesting up the good work.I would appreciate if you will try to update it as fast as you can as i can't wait to read more. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/6/2015 Really hes not freaked abour winging a man? Also except for bombing his teat Minato was above average in school amd even passed a harder version of the test given by matsu and hes kindness is above average |
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/6/2015 Well that stupid of them not to use the cards |
| KingPlotBunny chapter 1 . 5/2/2015 wow I don't think I've ever seen a list of all 108 sekirei nice I'm a little concerned Minato might be OP but I still want to read your story I've overlooked it a few times in all honesty since I generally just read the M rated ones (yes I'm a perv I know) |
| ethan.lukkar chapter 4 . 4/19/2015 Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon. |
| xOSilverRavenOx chapter 4 . 4/18/2015 Woo grate chapter |
| xOSilverRavenOx chapter 3 . 4/17/2015 I really hope you update soon I love this fanfiction it's one of the best I have read on Sekireis and i'm looking forword to reading more of this story |
| fuddler chapter 4 . 9/19/2014 What about the go on a date or go to a arcade? Also are gonna make it so minaka doesn't the them back? I hope you do. All the others at the inn are hiding, so why can't they hide too. ;) |
| Real-Dreamer chapter 4 . 9/18/2014 lol, no worries but you may overthinking the situation thus causing the blockage. ANYWAY! I believe it would be better to have Haihane and Beni be on a seperate activity with Minato. It would be the ideal oppunity to give the characters and the couple/bonds individual growth and development. A couple scene doesn't need to be overly complex, simple everyday matters can become romantic or bonding as soon as the couple becomes aware of each other and there surroundings. For Haihane, I would suggest furniture or cloths shopping, given the right atmosphere. Once a new couple realise they are shopping together for furniture or asked when it's there first purchase... they light up like a christmas tree :D seen it sooo many times. Heck even simple kitchenware or grocery would do... but usually the more bigger or expensive the item the more meaning it has. With Beni... I would suggest an arcade, a gym excercise or a physical event suiting her straight forward nature. Thats about it, good luck! |
