As it was rated "T" I wasn't entirely expecting the love scene but no matter. I'd love to know how it got to this and all the in between and what comes after but such is the nature of a one-shot. Thanks for the quick read! :)

Aldhlajzs that last line is amazing!

That might have broken my heart there for a good minute or two. This was so powerful, it evoked so many emotons in such a short amount of time, and I will be the first to admit that I am not okay. That last line was close to forcing out the ugly sobs, I ddon't know how I contained myself.

this story was absolutely wonderful. It had everything I didn't know I needed, and it was such a satisfying read with a beautiful flow. Kudos to you my friend.

thank you for sharing!

Aw! I thought that this was going to break my heart and it did but then Killian came back for her. So amazing. Love how Emma paid Killian to be her boyfriend, but in the end, their attraction won out and he came back! Thanks so much for this, glad it ended this way. :D

I've been reading your stories for a couple of hours tonight. I don't usually review older stories, but that last scene took my breath away. Amazing finish. Everything I've read so far is so well written. Now I have to read everything.

That was heartbreaking and beautiful!

aw! love the ending! beautiful!

OMG this FF is amazing...I am following you for a while now, and I read this FF just now. I'm Italian so I am very selective because before enjoying an FF, since English is not my first language, for me it has to be understandable and easy to read, especially the writing should not be lost in details that make you forget the plot so belive me when I say this that now l'm sure this is were l fall for your works... sigh I love your stories...Yep!

You're amazing.
Just thought you should know ;)

I love this story so much. I've read it twice today.

Beautiful!

Aww, this was lovely.

love love love. that is all :)

This went through angsty and superhot and then overwhelming so fast I feel like I just rode the emotional rollercoaster. It was an amazing ride, by the way! *g* Thank you!

This is so fabulous! Definitely my new favourite one shot/drabble! You are so absolutely talented! What a gift you have!