Reviews for Pack Holiday |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So I've read a couple of your fics and I realized that the smut scenes are all the same...anyway loved the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awh, too cute ! Loved it ! |
![]() ![]() ADORBSABLE! LOOOVEEEE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute. There were several grammar errors that made it hard to understand a few sentences. But other than that, this was a cute story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww loved this :) |
![]() ![]() This was really sweet, but u might want to work on writing different sex scenes for ur stories instead of just copying them from another one of your stories. I'm not sure if your good or not at writing sex scenes and that's why u copied it. Sorry I'm rambling lol just making suggestions. Good job though |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing I loved it ! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww man... I was in love with this... until I read the sex scene... its the same one from Puppy Love... :( I mean, I really liked it seriously. I just wish you would have written a new scene. Keep writing these amazing stories please! But.. write new scenes instead of copying word for word? That was my only problem. |
![]() ![]() so cool 0-0 |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was amazing. I loved the Sterk action. Really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG i loved this:) Sterek is the best! Good job on the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() they sound like areal family. great job |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwww that was seriously sweet! I love the idea of a pack holiday That zac dude was an idiot Thank you so much for writing! |