Ouch. Just...ouch. Perfect last line. But...you've gotta not kill Olivia anymore.

Empty, angry, breathless, furious, lost, Elliot? Exceptionally well written and believable here. Ouch.

Your writing is so beautifully vivid. I am blown away by your talent and way of making your readers so emotional. I would love to see more EO stories in the future, I love your style

...Jesus...

That was beautiful and so daggone sad at the same time. You want to believe Olivia is stronger than that, but at the same time it's so believable that this could be the route she takes.

I love your angst.

This is beautifuly sad. I have tears.

This is very touching. It feels realistic and you include so much emotion. Brava.

Yikes...! Beautifully written, But I sure hope that's not how this plays out.

Wow, that was intense

Wow. Jesus. That was powerful. I think you wrenched my heart out of my chest, but it was worth it. Thank you for this! Bravo.

Heartbreaking