I really liked the part where you talked about how Tris and Tobias don't work together in perfect harmony, and I thought the symphony metaphor was really creative and a great idea. :)

Are You not going to keep writing the story

Love this! I hope you come back to finish this story.

It's amazing how you write and accommodate both the happy and sad parts..you make the reader curious and I'm practically at the edge of my seat.. you're remarkable and with each chapter you come closer to Veronica Roth and what if you didn't write divergent..these stories are yours and are amazing..keep writing !

Please come back and finish the story! PLEASE?!

I love this story! I really hope you see it through to finish it!

great story, thanks. can't wait for more ;) i really love it :)

Great story which I discovered recently... Hope you will keep updating, well written.

ok,I absolutely LOVE this story, but i am back a month later-to be very disapointed. it is now december 18th...this is self explanitory.

:)

Loved the chapter excited to read more

Soo much crying jfc

Why is it called my little soldier lol

Thank you for this awesomely sweet chapter. Happy birthday

This is really good. You tend to overuse phrases like dark eyes but it’s still good. I’m really tired so I’m gonna sleep (finally) but I’m gonna finish the story tomorrow or at least sometime soon :)