PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSEEEEEEE FINISH THE STORY!

Are you gonna finish it? I hope you do!

CONTINUE! CONTINUE! JUSTICE SAYS CONTINUE! MY FUJOSHI FEELINGS SAYS CONTINUE! AND WE ALL SAY CONTINUE! XD anyways, I LOVE it! *_*

Please update!

Could you please continue?

Pls pls pls i beg you! T-T give it a continuation plss! It was realy ultinately great! Lets not forget HOT capslock to make it intense! I hope you think about finishing this TT i would totally read it! I beg you... (_ _) *bows deeply*

OMG it's this so hot! Good job

OOOOHHH PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS XD

Oh my god! No! You do not tease the Mistress then stop right there! I demand to see the rest! w please?

ContinueContinueContinueContinueContinueContinueContinueContinueContinueContinueContinueContinue Please this was fantastic and I want to see it go into smut territory. Please? For me? I'll give you a cookie...

Please continue this! I need more! It was amazing and hot and I want to know how it ends. Please please pretty please!

My, my, my! It's been a good while seeing a new MaRinKa fic around here. This is quite a welcome treat! x333
Though it isn't guaranteed to convince you, I'll put my foot forward with the others and try my best! Here I go!

You wanna what makes this OT3 so enjoyable to read? The idea that it brings the best of both worlds into one! You got MakoHaru; full of cuddles, sweetness, and oft surprising seductiveness. And of course, RinHaru; all the spice of a heated romance, biting teases and smoldering words. Now, put 'em together and what do ya get? The perf combo of balancing cute and sexy, creating-
SWEXY! (sweet 'n' sexy, not original i kno) Thereby enhancing the overall hawtness of all 3 into a lvl. unmeasured! 8DDD
That is why, despite the shortness of this story, it's easy enough to tell that this has good potential.

So that's why it would be awesome if you'd continue, the promise of bondage is veery tempting. B3
But if not, then I'd just like to say thanks for making this. It's renewed my luv for this 3-some. Take care! :3

You should write more!

It's Marinka. I don't WANT you to continue, I MEED you to continue. Pleeeeeeease write more *_*

Holy crap, this is the best thing ever. "Meh, if it's foreplay only I doubt it's going to do anything" - that's what I thought, but damn was I wrong. I reeeally like it where Makoto and Rin are leading to with the ropes and leather ;3 And I really hope you decide to continue this fic! Though its up to you.