this chapter got me really. it's great but painful to see a mother die but knows that she will always watch her child grow no matter what

very good, hopefully natsu has not died, when next chapter?

I’m glad the grammar got better after those first few chapters it was getting a bit rough for a minute there

Gave me a big spook when you said van until I remember they have cars that run on magic in fairy tail

I et he was playing with him but he should be way stronger than not only natsu but erza aswell... as you stated before phenoix where the strongest they just had less members so doesn't matter if erza is the daughter of irene. Plus he started his training way earlier not too mention went out and traveld while erza stayed at one place..

Something that will make me instantly drop is if you give natsu mc's flame... he shouldn't even be able to touch or eat it with hoe much stronger the mc should be over him. Tbh your novel seems to constantly nerf the mc making him look stupid and dumb most of the time

making him way too much of a pushover. he has more priorities than erza... his own father he made a promise too trumps a girl he met for what 4 days or something ? Still stupid he gave her his only connection to his mother and then when he comes back he still treats him like that ? kinda disgusting really. He should have been mad and left for being treated like that... a bit sad but still angry not acting like it's his fault. Again he knew her for like 4 days so fuck off with that. Plus calling that place home ? Um no... his home is with the chef and mountain. Can you not make this forced af ?

Ngl may sound sexist but feel this is a female writer. Or just a fcking machonist man. Can feel the women superiority in the writing kinda sad really makes the story annoying in places.

Plz continue it’s getting really good

Man I never lost the hope. Thank you for come back.

Thank you for return. Please continue.

like it!

How's about the next time Arthur pigs out, make him anime-bloated.

Please continue this history.

Uhh hey. I know it's been 2 years but are you ever gonna update this? I like how Erza and Arthur interact, it makes me grin.

Is there more story?

Why's he calling that woman sister?