Reviews for Always
Patricia Adams chapter 2 . 5/14
I love that chapter it’s so cool how Harry is learning to fly so quickly keep up the remarkable work!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/14
Wow that was a great first chapter just woah!
ROSAFROST chapter 12 . 12/28/2016
Love the idea of the 'Detentionees' sign. Bet JK wishes she'd thought of that lol.
ROSAFROST chapter 9 . 12/28/2016
Just finished Chapter 8 n love the new Severus response to Harry and Hermione in their first Potions lesson.
Loving the whole thing so far.
Off I go to Chapter 9
Gleas chapter 21 . 9/5/2015
That was so... Gryffinodor... Snape has more finesse than that and he should have looked for his daughter long before now
Gleas chapter 17 . 9/5/2015
OI! Where the conversation with Snape about houses etc...?!
Gleas chapter 15 . 9/5/2015
This was a most confusing chapter. You need to use dividers and organize better!
Alex chapter 25 . 6/23/2015
Interesting hell
Alex chapter 19 . 6/23/2015
I can't stop the grammar nerd, at the end you forgot the apostrophe in Sev's, there was not a herd of Snapes (god that's a scary image), so you need an apostrophe
Alex chapter 14 . 6/23/2015
Sirius is jumping the gun a bit.
Alex chapter 7 . 6/22/2015
You left out the sorting hat song
Alex chapter 4 . 6/22/2015
Parallels
travisblack117 chapter 8 . 4/19/2015
please fix this its really hard to follow when its all clumped together like this
Lunacom chapter 1 . 1/27/2015
Um... Well this is an okay start. It felt a little rushed and there are a lot if super long paragraphs. Maybe with a good beta there could be some order brought to this. Or maybe it was an uploading error that never got fixed.
Lady FireMage chapter 8 . 11/13/2014
its good so far but try to separate paragraphs so its easier to read
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