Lmao I read this article! The entire time i was like bitchhhhh i think this was based off a real story

Por fin, adios Saito HDP

Wow ,esto se está poniendo interesante. Así que los fantasmas son buenos y están avisando a los dueños.

This was good!Well done! I love your sense of humor! Well done!

This fic was... AMAZING! I was on the edge of my seat, I was scared, I was terrified, I was relieved, and the happy ending brought it all together beautifully! Wonderful work! This fic was unlike any supernatural/haunting I have ever read! Thank you!

And it is hilarious that Itachi had sex with a ghost(male.

I thought you would let Saito return in the end to possess one of their children .BTW,keep up the good work.

Awwww~
Such a happy family...
I wanna a family just like that~
Luv it a lot!

I am not going to log in BUT RUUUUUUU HE'S GONE IT WAS 3 IN THE MORNING WHEN I FINISHED THIS AND STARTED CRYING NOT SOME SOFT CRIES BUT AN UGLY SOB. Either way I loved this story

No...Nonononono fuck! IM GONNA HAVE A FRIEKEN HEART ATTACK!

Shit! First chapter and im already at the edge of my seat! Creepy at f*#k! But still love it!

Okay. this was a super scary, super good story with a super cute ending. one thing that I have to say though, you fell victim to what I like to call "fanfic authors time skip syndrome". basically you told us when things were going to happen and when a time skip was taking place. as an author it's your job to put those things into the story, therefore giving the reader more to read. if you pick up a YA book at a library you'll notice that the authors only tell you when a very significant amount if time has passed (like, years and years). other than that they'll just put in phrases such asa few days later", "it was several hours later when...", or even "an indefinite amount of time had passed. it may have been hours, or only seconds." be more descriptive with the passage of time and your while piece will flow a lot better. also, don't put in little details after they happen if they're relevent to the plot of the story. saying that 3 years have passed, then stating that Naruto and Sasuke had had a kid 2 years earlier doesn't help with the flow of the story. it's like you pushed the reader far ahead in one direction, only to yank them back so fast they got vertigo. it can be very confusing, so just remember that. other than that I liked your character pairings, the fact that you made the Hyuuga's siblings instead of cousins, however you skipped over a lot of the bad guys backstory and the flashback in the end would have served better as a real-time part of the fic. but overall if was a good story with a unique and interesting plot that kept my eyes glued to my screen for several hours. your characters were well thought out and their dialogue was very believable, if a bit too sophisticated for the characters sometimes. all in all I enjoyed this fic and I wish you luck on all of your future stories.

Just finished reading it at one go, and I'm glad because the fluff in the epilogue is gonna make it easier to fall asleep tonight :P I'm even inspired to make a supernatural itasaku of my own :3

Loved it...I usually don't read itasaku, but I madean acception this timr, and I am glad I did! Nice work!

sorry for not reviewing for all chapters, i get so into them that i just forget to lol
but damn, this was a really good fanfic, the plot was perfect
i loved to chapter to death because not too many writers do this for us readers
just getting a look into itachi, sakura's and sasuke, naruto's was great, like i said not too many do that and for once the sasunaru was cute teehee, kind of makes me want to squeal lmao
you did an awesome job!