Interesting! For the dialogue for the Hulk seems between the classic way he talks in three person and where he talks normally. I think I like it, specially when the Hulk talks like a normal person.

Keep up the good work! :D

I like the realistic feel to the story. Like how, while the Hulk is still pretty strong and tough, he is not unbeatable. So that's pretty cool. :)

Awesome! I always like seeing the Hulk smashing stuff and fighting the military. It's always a blast to watch or read. :D

The Hulk appears! I am really excited to see what happens next! :)

Just as with the first two stories, I really enjoyed this one. It seems the more I read these stories, the destruction becomes progressively more chaotic. Makes sense since all these extraordinary beings are coming to light in the public.

As far as the craft goes, I personally enjoy it. It's straightforward and screenplay-like. I like it because it's more than just actions. You provide just enough imagery to let the story flow. Some people would complain "oh, it's all action and it's all 'X did this, Y did this'" but it doesn't bother me (and plus, it's not really all "X, Y did this" anyway).

The set-up for Sterns becoming the Leader seemed a bit predictable. That's not necessarily a problem because I wouldn't know how else it could've been approached.

Talbot's mental breakdown was rather bizarre and interesting. I like the mystery of if he really was hallucinating or that armor really was a part of him (unless I missed something). However, he did kind of end up being the typical "obsessive villain" but not so much that it took me off the story. It also reminded me of how they depicted Emil Blonsky/The Abomination in the MCU film.

Also, for dialogue, this could be just a personal thing with me but a few lines were rather...well...corny (referring mainly to Talbot's dialogue during the climactic battle sequence). Here's why I don't wanna say that you should change it: because a lot of comic book dialogue itself is very, very corny. And it seems that you're taking that direction with it in this fanfic.

Overall, I enjoyed reading the story and I'm digging this universe.

P.S. Sorry I didn't get to review Iron Maiden! I was really busy with classes around the time I finished reading it and unless I go back to it again, I don't wanna review it without fresh thoughts.

Man I like Cho

That was nice with bruce and betty I kinda love your story so far is mutant girl coming back she was cool

ROB?

RUN DUDE!

Oh great. Sterns...

Poor Bruce...

Awwww... I was hoping for the comic origin. Then we'd have Cho and Rick chasing down Banner.

Excellent Work! What had Sterns Done?! I can't wait to see what happens next!