Why doesn’t minato have a hirashin mark on naruto? Pretty sure he had one on kushina in the anime

Nooooooooooooiooo!

Lol Naruto and Sasuke’s Uchiha daycare

update please

Dude even for a 15 year old your grammar sucks like i can understand if you make some minor mistakes here and there but this it’s not just some spelling mistake or something your sentence structure is completely messed up . You can’t even form a coherent sentence

Dammit dude why you just stopped writing this fanfic ? I've read more than a hundred fanfic and I liked this one the most. Your storytelling is spot on and the plot is also amazing. You've done a great job in the character development and you also have added some great OC's. The best thing that I like about this story is that it is not too dark, not too fluffy and not too light. It has the correct proportions of everything. I just wish you would continue this story again even though I know it isn't possible. I just wanted you to know how much I admired your work.
Thank you.
A Fan Of Your Work.

Ok, I was about to piece out because I thought Naruto was 4 and not 8, seeing that at the end was beneficial. Thought a 4 year old was out here doing all this nonsense.

That sounds like an amazing technique... I was just thinking the other day that when people do a space/time technique they focus more on the space side, and I thought it would be cool to see a move that focuses more on the time manipulating aspect

The writing has taken a drastic increase in quality, which I can't help but appreciate. The actual pacing and grammar is so much better than the initial few chapters.

A question. As Naruto is, he can only advance a little bit more. He can unlock the perfect sussano, he could retrieve Shisuis other Mangekyo and use both his eyes to achieve EMS, which his uchiha/Senju EMS would likely be even more effective than the standard, and of course the Rinnegan, which he should be able to eventually access with his DNA. It will be interesting to see play out.

The fuck? In the previous chapter Minato addressed her by her full name, telling her to take off the cloak. Now when SHE says it, suddenly he's surprised? Bit of an oversight, don't ya think?

If one of Narutos eyes posses long range kamui, then wouldn't his other posses short range? That's how Obitos kamui eyes worked. Speaking of, how can Naruto have Kamui when he is only distantly related? Sasuke and Itachi had Amaterasu, but they were also directly related.

manga are read from back to front and right to left instead of from to back and left to right like a comic.

You seriously need a beta. Otherwise decent story.

I wish you would keep working on this great story

Beside the stylistic differences comics and mangas are read in a different order, comic panels are read in the same order as English books, left to right top down, manga are read right to left and top down.