Surprisingly pleasant and well written.

I know this was six years ago and you've probably long since moved on from this, but, as someone who didn't really enjoy the movie too much (most likely for being way out of the intended age range) I did enjoy this story for adding a sense of realism to the story with consistent grammar, which is too rare around these parts. The writing was very well done, which I didn't expect. There are only 22 stories on this section, so hats off to you for publishing this knowing that it was unlikely anyone would ever see it.

I'm also a huge fan of the brotherly love between Theo and Chet. Such a big fan, in fact, that I'd probably say that it was my favorite part of the movie. The narrative was definitely trying too hard to relate it to the Taco Bros but you made it work in a better way. You captured the "they care about each other, but it's complicated because they're so different" thing. And also the inner workings of the Plant was interesting to see.

I have a tendency to write long reviews, as you can tell...
I just try to replicate the length I like seeing myself, hah.

Good job with it, though. A very nice one-shot.

- Zojak