It genuinely makes me sat that after all these years (I've been following this story for 10 years) that it's still never been completed. As a huge Cowboy Bebop fan, this being the best FanFic I've ever read on the source, it's really a shame. This could have easily been turned into a legit prelude for the show.

I love your work so much! It is my favorite fan-fiction of all time and the only story on here that I will ever review. I have literally read it like a dozen times, but it never gets old. Keep up the great work! _

By far the best origin story I've ever read. It's a real shame you haven't continued it (unless you decided to stop and become a real author XD). I recommend this story to everyone, it's amazing.

FYI: Father Thomas remains my favourite OC, though Crys comes a close second.

Amazing story! I love how you write. My absolute favorite lines are from Vicious: "Better that he's alive. Every man needs a good enemy." I love the foreshadowing in that sentence of Spike and Vicous' relationship. Please update and finish this work of art!

cmon upload another chapter! :P

Love it. Update please.

Wonderful story. Splendidly written. Write more please!

Haha! You write so beautifully; I can't wait for more :(

It seems as though this story has been going very slowly for a very long time...so I'm hoping I won't have to wait too long for an update, but I'm willing to wait for it :D

As I've said before, this fanfic is fantastic. So far, you have given every character three dimensions, even your own characters. Normally author characters are a real turn off, but I find yours to be rather endearing. Furthermore, you manage to keep all of the Bebop characters acting in ways that make it feel as though this fanfic is the real truth to the events before the show (although that's obviously what you were going for, most authors fail, and for your so-far success, you should be commended).

I love the cute moments as well as the serious moments, and you certainly seem to have done some research to have so accurately depicted some of the scenes that you include. It's those little extra details that make your story seem so special.

Anyways, my point is that this is an amazing fic and I wanted to express my gratitude to you for writing it. Even if I'm secretly hoping to flatter you into writing more in the hopefully near future xD

Another great chapter! I'm loving it even though it's keeping me from completing my homework xD

Aw, everyone calls the bird ugly...but I always thought it was pretty/cute XD

Another great chapter _

I think this chapter is my favorite one so far :D

I love the interaction between Spike and the cop, and I'm a bit suprised that Spike didn't try to go after Dozanti himself for deceiving him XD

I love how you write Vicious.

I'm loving this so much. You're writing is astounding. I hope you are still continuing this story _

This story is so amazingly well written; I can't believe I hadn't found it until today! I love your style, it's so incredibly believable and addictive. I've read it straight through and now it's almost 3 AM...but I still need to finish. But then again, if I finish now I won't have any more to read later. Such a dilema :P

Anyways, I love it, and I noticed that the latest chapter was updated this month...Wow...You're still going strong. I hope this tale never ends. I love it so much. It's easily one of the best (if not THE best) fanfics I've ever read.

PLEASE write more! When will you update next?