This is really good I hope you come back to it.

I know it been years since you updated and you have probably moved on to other things. But if could come back this story is amazing.

My heart stoped twice while reading this chapter. The first time was when Glenn had started questioning Daryl about his relationship with Beth and "But she's-" "Mine." Guh. Dead.
The second was when I went to click the "Next" button for chapter 14 and it wasn't there.
I know it's really hard to get back to writing, especially after such a long time, plus life happening, plus all the crap that went down in the show, but I STRONGLY encourage you to pick this baby back up and run with it. This is by far one of the best bethyl fics I've read - and I mean that. If there's anything I can do to help, please tell me.

Ack! Here's another quick reminder how awesome this story is so I can speed through to the next chapter to find out what the crap just happened.

One of the things I find most impressive with this story is that you can switch from Beth to Daryl to Joe POV seamlessly without having to label it each time, and yet it's never confusing as to who is "speaking." It shows confidence in your own writing, and that's a very good thing.

That was...amazing! I knew Beth would be the one to get that particular ball rolling...no pun intended. Seriously, though. It was perfect. You know, aside from Daryl turning back into, well, Daryl. That man...

It kills me that they both torture themselves by ignoring these feelings for each other.

I can't help but wonder if Joe's group has come across the right walkers already. Just trying to gauge where they are in relation to each other.
And speaking of relations, so proud of Beth for snapping Daryl out of his little "I better shut myself off from anything good" routine a la crap.

I'm beginning to hate those five words - okay that's it for now. I can't wait for them to find a car so they can put some serious miles between them and Joe so they can be *them* and not two people running for their lives.

I can't tell you enough how freaking addictive this story is. I mean, here it is, almost one in the morning, and I really should try to get some sleep, but when I try, all I think is"what's going to happen next?!"

You know what would be great? A big thunderstorm to wash away any tracks. Joe is getting just a little too close for comfort.
And what do you mean nothing happened?! The interactions between these two are just about killing me with feels.
He gave her something pretty. Sigh...

Urgh! These chapters are far too short! To see their admiration for each other even as they're running for their lives is so powerful!

Jesus! This is so different from any other fix I've read, not the kind I usually go for, but it's so good! It just sucks you right in and...wow.

For once, I'm glad the show went the way they did rather than your version of Joe and the claimers. Oh, how awful! I mean, it's really good and makes them absolutely horrendous, but...they gimme the jibblies.

Wow, this is really dark. That's not a bad thing, either. Incredibly well written.