I loved this! What a boon to read authentic Victorian dialogue and style! I don’t know how I overlooked this doc for so long! Well done!

Oh your writing is sublime and what a clever way to sneak in a dance scene!

I love this! What a banger of a kiss!

Enjoyed your story, including your "epilogue of sorts." I look forward to reading more of your work.

I might be a considered a grinch, but I do not feel sorry for Margaret. As much as I love North and South and P&P, I have a hard time showing sympathy for someone who has been so judgemental of others. Margaret wants John to prove his love for her by doing the things SHE feels he should do. However, John just loves her for her. Besides, her own decisions has had their own negative consequences. With all that being said, I am enjoying the book, and this will pass:)

Read all your stories which are just greasy, wish you would write more.

well done! I enjoyed the premise and starting point of this and how the one conversation helped clear their path forward in a different manner than the book. you wove in quotes and situations from the book seamlessly and maintained characterizations well. thanks for sharing this.

I absolutely loved this story, read it all in an afternoon, thank you so much for sharing

This was so beautifully put together.

Her teaching him to dance was so cute.

Very nice

Trust each other. Believe no other lovers. wow so highly praise of true love. Lovely writing. Thank you so much.

Oh my God... Lovely dance. loved the story. amazing.

I have only one word: beautiful. And well structured. Every part of this story makes sense in relation to the whole story. I would've liked to read more, but I think you did end it at a proper moment. I imagine a long and happy life for these two, solving all their problems together.

I absolutely LOVE this fic, definitely one of the best I’ve ever read! I happen to really like the angst, because it makes their union in the end even happier for all the pain that preceded it. My favorite parts were Margaret’s indignant cry after John said they were nothing to each other, and then John’s subsequent plea for forgiveness. Incredible work! Thank you for writing this delightful story!