Awesome story, glad that in this story Oberon and Kahn manage to awake to their errors and start to make amends. Its great to see them at their heroic selves as we only saw their corrupted forms in the game. I really cheered when they saw the one responsible for their corrupting and got some well deserve retribution on that guy for turning their world into a living hell.

Thank you very much for writing this. It's a nice "what if" scenario.

Wow, its kind of sad that this story only has one other really its really good. You did a great job in my opinion.

I have actually been following this story, and have found it both enjoyable and original. It's also a damned crime this is the first review. So good story and keep writing, even if it takes you forever.
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