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Loved the story and plot but please work on grammar and spelling, you should definitely make another one it was that great

oh my gosh. Loved it.

Love the story! But the grammar needs work!

Please keep going but you might want help with grammer

love the story line and not to be picky or anything but the grammar is driving me up the wall

tip:Learn how to YOU DO NOT KNOW HOW TO SPELL!

USE PARAGRAPHS!
this made my brain hurt trying to read it